Congratulations, this is one of the best project pitch presentations I've seen. It was very well constructed and delivered, starting from the very beginning when you asserted the reason for the work and why it was important. If I had been on the board of a grant funding organisation, your project would have won my vote.

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Your website functioned equally well as an information site and as a presentation platform. Your pacing and delivery was also very well done, and you even had the presence of mind to skip unimportant details in favor of making sure the core concepts were covered in the amount of time given. I hope you could see the class was impressed as well. I wish I had a recording of it to show to others in the future - you should be very proud of this work and it's quality.

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The idea itself is very strong, especially in the way you have deepened the idea since you originally spoke with me about it and intelligently incorporated feedback from our discussion. The idea itself could have a little bit more originality, however the way you are planning to embed the user into the avatar is unique and interesting. I look forward to seeing this project develop and hope you continue to approach the project with such high standards.

Stephanie Andrews

VR/Digital Media Lecturer - Former 3D Artist at Pixar

4 April, 2019